All Comments on 'Jake's Fortune Ch. 05'

Now we are cooking with Crisco! Loved this one

by combining what you have into a coherent submission. one of sufficient substance to actually say something instead of merely hinting at it a fraction of a page at a time.

it doesn't destroy him when he finds out he killed his mother...

I'm really enjoying the story. Keep up the good work. I appreciate it.

Enjoying the story line. Would like to see longer posts though. 3 or 4 paged at a time would be nice to see. Keep up the writing! :)

Thanks.

The delay is really out of my control. I submit every new chapter as soon as the previous is posted. The bottleneck is the submission process.