All Comments on 'Jake's Fortune Ch. 12'

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its torture! im hooked, bookmark each one ahead of time so when I get home at 11:30PM CST I see the "submission awaiting approval" then at 12:01AM CST I hit refresh and READ...

I have even started re-reading Voyage (another LR story that was good enough to transition from LR to book) to pass the time in a space type fantasy land!

I'm deeply honoured that you find my story entertaining! I wish I could distribute them quicker, but this is the best I can do right now.

Lovin this story please just keep goin really great story

Just loving this story. Wish it could be longer than one page.

thanks for the time to write this story refreshing take on what your writing.

like most people said need more then 1 page but im sure your doing your best

Don

One page at a time. I see a little ingenuity there. At first irritating, now. I tend to compare it to the poetic style of Haiku. Each page part of the whole, is complete.

Like I said earlier when I commented Anonymously that I liked that it isn't so draw out over chapters and chapters .. Your story gets straight to the point and there's so much more room to explore. This chapter was considerably shorter than any, but kudos to you for pumping out great chapters in such a short time pace!... Looking forward to your next installment!

13's not up... all that bookmarking for nothing!

i kid, i kid...

good show, eager as ever!