All Comments on 'Jake's Fortune Ch. 14'

by vWrath

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SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusalmost 10 years ago

Not nearly enjoyable as it once was...stop preaching and just write

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

So does Jake know what love is or even give a shit about his family? According to the story the answer is NO

vWrathvWrathalmost 10 years agoAuthor
That's why I love you guys :)

I'm really not big on emotions and my writing reflects this. I'll try to focus more on that in the sequel, which I'm writing right now.

I really do appreciate criticism though. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Another good one

Hey Vwrath thanks for another chapter of Jake and his space adventures... more please...

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