All Comments on 'Jake's Progress'

Simply fantastic. Bravo!

this is a Literotica winner, a very good read and very hot many THANKS,

Fantastic story. It is the best I have read in a while. I loved reading this story.

Has to be one of the best on here for awhile and well worth the wait. Got you a '5' and a 100% and worth that and more. Thanks. JAG/TSO

The build-up, the tension, the way both of them worked toward what they wanted so tentatively...great work. I liked the little details about fashion, too.

1) He has his own TV set (also internet)...so why the competition for control of the TV?

(2) the night visits with flashlight, dopey, implausible (which is problematic in a story obviously striving for realism -- most stories are filled with ridiculous and implausible details which we accept because they make no effort to be realistic).

The wrestling on the couch would have been sufficient to build into seduction without the night spying. Of course that would have been a slightly different story, but no less erotic.

These quibbles do not keep me from giving the story 5 stars.

Great story. Great build up and climax at the end, the only suggestion I have is to either use spell check or get someone to proof read your stories. Some of it was hard to read because of misspelled words. Otherwise great story.

Pure sexual Tension. I loved it. Great story submission

Great story, thrilling and so good when Jake finally had his mom. The love and passion that they share between them is fantastic. They are a perfect match for each other, and share a mutual love for each other.The slow build of sexual tension was just perfect.

A great story, well told. Your slow build-up had me eagerly clicking for the next page.

Hot story, enjoyed it, thanks.

Just my kind of story, building up slowly to a great climax; literate but not pretentious, and mercifully free of clichés about length, girth, volume of emissions and contorted positions. (The guy who criticized your spelling errors is out of his mind, or perhaps he believes that all the usually misspelled words on Literotica are spelled right. There were a couple of typos but grammar and punctuation were impeccable. A pleasure to read.)

Just wanted to thank you for the wonderful story. The build up to the climax was perfectly written. Personally did not find any flaws with grammar/spelling. Had me on the edge of my chair the whole time. 5***

Great story, told with excellent delivery. Ignore the tit that gave you a zero for a couple of spelling mistakes. There are authors on this site, totally focused on scores, that leave anonymous comments and lows scores on the flimsiest of excuses.

I just loved this story, it's so fun, and playful. I sincerely hope you write more stories of this quality, with loving characters.

"dishabille" -- there's a wordsmith in the woodpile.

Fantasticaly entertaining story. The build up was very good, and the way the tension develops was nicely written too. Nice work! I'm looking forward to read more of your works, GeorgieH. Particularly mom/son stories, my favourite ones.

Excellent work, good buildup decent climax keep up the good work

A Good Read, although I felt some innner debates by the main character were a bit long, I still enjoyed it overall and thank you for this tale.

I dont mind the buid-up. The only thing is the speech after the mum woke up seems a bit too sugarly and it's slightly off character of her fun and no-non-sense personality. Other than it is a wonderful read. The wrestling and sex scenes are very well done. Thank you very much for sharing.

Fucking hot

Just...wow. Seriously hot.

The story is longer than I'd prefer. But I think the pace and scenario are realistic.

Very Good Story! I enjoyed every minute of it. You, Sir, are a hell of a writer!

Thank you,

Rick

Personally, I loved the story, every word of it. The build up was sensational and the climax was just that. This is the second story of yours that I have read and I was so pleased to find out how much you have written. I will not be satisfied until I have read every one.

Of course we know where the story is going. You made the "scenery" along the way as interesting and compelling as the journey's end. I love your writing and your sense of humor. Your sharing of the mother's thought processes made it easy to empathize with her, Neat lady!

superbly written another of ur treats wooow like i said im a fan especially thrilling is the female point of view andthe slow build up great work

A great story.

Sexy sexy sexy sexy sexy. Jake is one lucky motherfucker!!!!

WOW such a great story absolutely loved it. well written

Ooh god, your lesbian stories that had me hot, wet and well into a long session with my rabbit. One of them reminded me of high school and my best friend Stacy loving requesting to touch my breast. The feel of her warm tongue sliding over my areole and how my vagina responded to her hands and lips locking on to my nipples. Then I fumble across an incest tale that reminds my of my inappropriate fantasies for my older sisters son. The older sister who had seduce Stacy before turning her lose on me. So glad I put a towel beneath me before I started reading you work. GeorgieH would you text an old friend at 4am to tell her after 15 years the thought of her face between my legs still gets you off or would you envite you nephew over to watch tv and offer him something wicked.

This is the best story I've read on this submission page. But I also think all of the incest taboo stories you've written are great. Keep up the good work. With this many words in a story, the typos can be forgiven. Warren

Very well done. Excellent. I can't add anything new to what the other commentators have already said.

Thank you for the sense of realisim and guiding us through the emotional turmoil. Well written. Looking forward to reading your other selections.

Very nicely written. Also a very believable story...

A bit long, but 5 fucking stars!!

Very hot mother/son story. Build up to the main event was great. Just seems like it ended abruptly; would liked it if their experiences had been shared a bit further. But this was well worth a 5. Thanks for the read. -dave

I love this story and it is by far one of my favorite. It could have gone longer had you wanted but not any shorter. I was sucked in for the beginning and just wanted to keep reading. Great job!

Hate when the author feels compelled to make the mom so young. So she's 35, with an 18 year old son. ok

Couldn't get past the first of page one. Gay.

I thought this was great. The only part I wasn't too keen on was when she revealed she was awake the terms of endearment were a bit much. I didn't love th "my darlings. it sounded a bit dated. But the story was fantastic and believable. I could totally see this happening.

Top drawer

One of the best stories I have ever read in this topic. I hated for it to end but knew it would. Happy it was as long as it was. Wonderful storyline. I didn't even notice any grammatical errors as in the majority of most others. Prize winner.

Still one of my favourite stories. These characters could do so much more. So many things to teach Jake and other virgin's to loose. More please. Thank you for writing.

You’re trying too hard. Your improper sentence structure betrays you.

Wait, was it supposed to be a mom-son incest erotica? 5 out 6 pages were just about fighting over remote control. Lousy attempt at buildup.

The best sex is after good foreplay. This foreplay was outstanding - I am almost sorry that it has ended.