All Comments on 'Jane's Nasty Surprise'
by OldNicksMan
- 18 Comments
Stiremover 19 years agoExcellent story!!! I can't wait to see how she handles all this!I usually don't root for the women in these stories,but you can't help but cheer her on.I am looking forward to seeing her come out on top at the end.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoLike to see just how she gets out of this situation seeing she really does not know just how she got into it. Write some more for sure.
Anonymousover 18 years agoYes, please continue, would like to see how she gets her revenge.
Anonymousover 18 years agoExcellent story. Loved every bit of it. Waiting for the next part. Would including a bit of her being made to go for watersport, enema, and more anal sex add to her reluctant but the ultimate enjoyment of sexual abuse.
Anonymousabout 18 years agogreat start, can't wait to see what happens next and how she gets out of this box.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoI sincerely hope that the will be a continuation, otherwise it would not make any sense at all, I have to say that this is one of the better erotic stories I have read in a long time.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI absolutly have to know what happens!!!! Please continue this story!
don87654almost 18 years agoA great opportune time for any would-be businesswoman to gain insight as to what her life is supposed to be about, as a woman, in lieu of occupying a position that a man should be filling. Somehow our society has gravitated to this and has lost its aims for women to be women.
ArthurKingalmost 18 years agoI want to know where the sequel to this story is. Its so hot, why is there not a sequel!?
Anonymousover 17 years agoI don't know what to say; it's captivating! I was sitting up straight, shocked by every moment in the story! You really don't need a sequel, it's perfect as is.
Anonymousover 15 years agoPUT SOME RINGS IN HER NIPPLES WITH A PERMANANT CHAIN TO EACH OF THE THREE RINGS. PLEASE GET TO WRITING SOON!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousabout 15 years agoi read faster and faster,what a surprise at the end.love that the big black stud has feeling for the little white captive,hummmm.this could go interesting places.she was so totally mind controlled,what a fantasy.definitedly more chapters,PLEASE.
vexcaveover 14 years agoYou should write a continuation! Blackmail is always one of the best ways to go. Humiliation and degradation wouldn't hurt either.
