All Comments on 'Jane's Revenge'

When a delivery boy delivers flowers to a neglected wife sparks fly. Before long Jane is being serviced on the kitchen counter. This a delivery boy that knows how to deliver the 'goods.' Hot!

This is the second of your stories I have read now..Excellent wordage and visuals.

The coke bottle was a real surprise!

This was excellent. Good imagery and the ending was unexpected. Nice. Millie

that was and hopefully he'll deliver them flowers again