All Comments on 'Jane's Story'

I read no further. The phrase you're looking for is 'to all intents and purposes'.

I'd like to see this go a little further... maybe a sequel or some more of a resolution. The story so far is very good.

all intensive purposes. when you write this, what you're telling me is, this story is going to be a six page waste of time.

If you didn't like the story why did you read it???

Don

Your story started out great but the whole brad story stopped me right in my tracks. She was practically raped. You're in serious need of a psych eval.

"She was practically raped."

The story is in the nonconsent/reluctance category idiot. Learn how to navigate the site before you read stories and comment on them.

Great story I hope Brad is the father. Jane is a slut deep down.

Well written story. I can feel your experience from all parties in this story. Yes Jane was practically raped but she stil gave consence. The ending was a little odd and sad as she ends up being pregnant of not her choice. I am interested in the more sexual intimate side of these type relationship between teacher and student so otherwise is is an excellent written story

very nice, although the expression you wanted in the opening should be "for all intents and purposes".