All Comments on 'Janie and Me: How I Lost... Ch. 01'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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MrBill36MrBill36about 9 years ago
Very Nice

Just an easy start to what promises to be a very erogenous an exciting story. You must have enjoyed a surprise encounter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice Descriptions - NOT real Sexy, Tho!

You write well, I could have done with a bit more SEXINESS, however. You say its' a TRUE story & you did not want 2 add any EXTRA sex 2 it, I see! sigh, What-EV-er, gal! It could use some spicing up, U know. U DO write well, however

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
mmmm....

good story...great details.

lovely job lucious!

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 19 years ago
(')

Very nice, looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.

lol, BD

We2andmaybeUWe2andmaybeUalmost 19 years ago
great...

can't wait to read the rest!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
Bigrin'

mmm mmmm good!

yummy tail lucious tale

bigger grin~

another cherry bites

the dust <chuckleboned>

GoldeniangelGoldeniangelalmost 19 years ago
Great Start!

you know that i love reading your true stories =P lol... your'e gonna get people hot with this one i can tell! esp as they sit thinking about how it's real =D

i can't wait till things really get going now!

*HUGS*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
awesome....

that was fantastic...can't wait for the rest!

This is a TRUE story?? REALLY...as in your's the authors??

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