All Comments on 'Japanese Dream'

I thought it was a great little tale. Thanks so much for your story. I do hope to see more submissions from you.

Sorry Luv, it was great subject matter, but I don't like any force used on people, if they don't deserve it.

Loved how she chose her brother over career, and I thought this started out as a great start to a series.

Well written, no obvious mistakes that I could see. And would love to read more from you

what a sneaky girl using that company just to get her brother. sneaky and very smart.

Stories that include rape fantasies, sexual harassment, or something similar should come with a warning. It can be a turn off, and is just polite to warn readers before they read.

bro/sis love is pure and must not be shared they should remain exclusive. this is your forte. keep up the good work.