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Anonymousabout 20 years agoloved it
Hi! I loved your piece of work, please dont take too long writing the rest of it, because it was great and I can't wait to read the rest!
Anonymousabout 20 years agoProofread...
Nice story, but you need to proofread your work. Use spell check and grammar check. The grammatical mistakes distracts from the story.
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