All Comments on 'Jason and Matt Ch. 01'

I enjoyed it immensely.. Would love to hear more about Jason and Matt..

Poisoned? I stopped reading there.

There is the "poisoned", but hey typos slip in all of the time. The characters are anything but typical and I look forward to seeing how this initial attraction develops into a relationship. Oh and by the way, the detached sex of the gangbang juxtaposed with the emotions of their one on one encounter was masterful.

Peace and joy,

Shell

Great story! Great start. And you had such depth in there. I really liked Jason. Dont mind the poisoblaablaa you came here to.write us these great stories not to be our English teacher :) I hope you do continue and soon

I already miss the characters.

Matt playing captain save-a-hoe & got his ass handed to him for it Smh. It seems like Matt is just as lonely & desperate for love or the idea of it as Jason is. Jason would rather be a cum dumpster for a bunch of people who don't care or respect him than be alone. Matt would rather be with Liam who cheats & uses him than be alone. They're both pretty sad if you ask me. I don't see why Matt did all that for Jason it was consensual & plus he was using him to so he's no better than those other guys.

Damn typo. I hope that was the only one...with as many times as I re-read the bloody thing it better be the only one haha

Bambi: They are sad. Very, very sad. Jason has very low views of himself (more on that later) and Matt is chivalrous, sometimes to a fault, and he doesn't even realize it. (He's not as right in the head as he thinks he is.)

Dramatar: Wow, that means a great deal to me. This story and these two are so close to my heart. :)

Seeker: Thank you. That scene was what I saw in my head initially, and what all this sprang from.

Vesta: I will be posting a chapter two as soon as I can.

:)

Who the heck is Will?