All Comments on 'Jasons and the Johnsons'

5 ch. and no cigar.

it was just perfect. hy exite stuff i hope there will be a follow up story. specialy the part of the mother.

Ivan

Thank God I never ran into any fathers like Bridget's, I would have either given up or punched him out.

I hope that next Jason nails "Mom".

excellent...keep it slow...and true to the experience of early exploration and fantasy...the step by step development of mental states is more exciting than an anatomy lesson and sexualgymnastics

Really enjoyed this chapter - exploration of the thoughts and detailed descriptions of the environment, clothes etc really gets you in.

Great to read something that has some substance to it, made mewant to keep reading it till the end. Great way of keeping the audience captivated. Much more seductive than him just nailing her.

Can't wait for the next installement

v. cool, but this is a prelude, yes?

express my admiration of the variety, the detail, the knowledge of so many different subjects in textbook detail, and the slow buildup of eroticism. But here was one I had not read, and it took me back to my youth. The sexual escapades in my sweetie's basement play room (and how we did play) were always done with an eye to the door and an ear to the steps. And how many times did we nearly get caught sans clothes when we didn't hear the stair steps creak. That's the beauty of fantasy, to revive one's own memories or embellish them, and Mr. Petersunn's fantasy is so real that you feel you are there with the characters. Fantasy is just that. In many stories it is unbelievable, and the characters seem so much younger in their reactions, their struggles with first-time sex. And we were mostly all younger when we had similar experiences. But apparently, these kids have to be at least 18, so the experiences normally had by younger people are transferred to older ones. Well, here's another story beginning. Will it be continued as the kids explore one another? Will it be continued as the mom becomes more adventurous? Will Dad continue to avoid sexual encounters? I hope we get the answers soon from this terrific author.

Well written and very entertaining. Took me back to my high school days.Thankfully my girlfriend's dad wasn't this bad. Too bad the story is not

continued.

I can't wait to read the rest of the story!

5+ STARS

But now I will catch up.

I have no idea if the vocab and dialogue are remembered, totally manufactured or some of both and I think that indicates good writing.

Plot ?? A writer who aims for a Nobel prize plot in this genre has given himself a rough assignment

You took a long time getting it lined up and I admire that. So much easier to just put some paragraphs together.

Thank you.

Great writing as usual, Charles....I especially enjoyed the periodic mention that her Father soundly spanked young Bridget.... maybe that was part of the reason he didn't enjoy her Mom those days?? The thought occurred to me that he might have started panty and bra checks to make sure Bridget was not being too racy, especially on those evenings when she was studying or when she was about to go out on a date.... delightful series!! LOL

A 5 and no further words need's said. The title is sufficient.

In this day and age, it's difficult to believe such sexually, prim and overly proper families exist. With that much sexual repression, there has to be an explosion of lust coming. I'm looking forward to the release of lovely, lubricated lust.

A great mix between the quirky fairytale style and quality, with the enjoyment of long slow anticipation plus the gratification of some hot sex

It reminds me of h.s. Escapades.

Sandra Dee, Brad Pit? A bit of a time displacement here. I had this story taking place in the sixties. But it's okay. Oh great save! And you didn’t need to do a rewrite. I guess Jason was into the 50s/60s classic movies. Oh right, Bridget, Gidget, got it. Be careful with those gardening shears, ouch!

Very entertaining and refreshing to read on this website. Almost, wholesomely innocent. Five stars.