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Click hereI concentrated on the things that caused her to react, even to the point of attempting to repress my own impulses.
"Oh, that's nice!" she moaned and ground her hips into mine, meeting me thrust for thrust. Gradually, I became aware of a heady, musky scent generating from us, which only turned me on all the more. Trying to move my body upward in relationship to hers, I slid my knees under her thighs, raising her knees and found to my surprise that this opened her wider to me, allowing me deeper access into her. Her moans of approval told me that my accidental movement had been extremely successful.
Her hips rose to meet my thrusts and she sighed deeply as our hips thrust together. Her ankles locked behind me, effectively pulling her into me, meeting each thrust, synchronizing our movements.
Jeanne's eyes were closed, but she seemed to have an angelic smile of contentment on her face as we mated. Beads of perspiration were forming on her forehead and her upper lip. And somehow I recognized that everything was pointing out to me that she was really into it: she was thrusting to meet me; she was becoming even more lubricated and wet as we proceeded. I glanced down between us, and saw that her nipples were more erect than I had ever seen before. She was grunting in time with our thrusts and her pelvis was speeding up. She started grunting my name.
". . . Uhhh . . . uhhh . . . I think I'm getting close . . . " she gasped between grunts. "Are you close?"
Unconsciously, I sped up and began thrusting deeper into her, groaning back, "Uh-huh . . . I'm almost there!"
She squinted her eyes. "Okay . . . . Uhhh . . . Now! Together! . . . More! . . . More . . . More . . ." Her movements were becoming erratic and less coordinated, more instinctual, demanding even more from me.
I was pounding as hard as I could! I had nothing more to give, but I tried!
"More! . . . More . . . " Her hips were pounding against mine with even greater intensity. Her vagina was spasming erratically as she grunted and finally screamed my name as her muscles clamped down on me with intense strength, driving me over the edge. I thrust with each spasm as I poured my seed into her and she clutched me and cried out with each thrust.
Locked in each other's arms, we both struggled to extend our orgasms, both of us gasping erratically. And, inevitably, each of us completed our climaxes. And our panting began to slow down and we collapsed in each other's arms.
We lay like that for a long time, me cushioned on her breasts, still within her, but feeling myself shrinking. I knew from one of the books I had read, that I had to withdraw and be sure to take the condom with me before I got too soft, or leakage might occur. So I took one finger and pressed the base of the condom against my penis and withdrew. She moaned slightly as I left her, and I felt awkward, lying on top of her like that, so I rolled to the side.
Both of our eyes dropped and gazed at my almost flaccid manhood. I think we both realized at the same time that there were traces of blood on the condom. Our eyes met and we kissed again, more gently this time.
Chapter 6 – Life goes on Chapter 6 – Life goes on
We made love twice more that afternoon. When the third (and last) condom was used, we both were tempted to do it again without protection, but somehow good sense prevailed over hormones!
I think both of us wanted to run hope and announce to our parents that we were going to be married right then and there. But we both had the practical sensibility to know that we each had college ahead of us. And we knew we wouldn't be going to the same school. But eventually, someday, we would both graduate! In the mean time, we had the rest of the summer together! And we would be together in Hawaii for a month next summer.
There was not a whole lot that we could do to control the next several years, so reluctantly we both accepted our fate.
But we decided together that there was definitely one thing that wecould control! And we resolved together that neither of us would ever buy a package with only three condoms in it again!
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoThe umbrella of moralism protects the sex and Eros from dirtiness/sin. While it might make the intimacy more acceptable and comfortable for some, it also weakens the erotic power. These kids - you portray them realistically in their hesitations and uncertainties toward each other. But you don’t let their eroticism really speak by placing it under love and marriage. In Freudian terms, you force the id to bow to the super ego.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI really enjoyed the working up to the "Deed." A beautiful story.
Anonymousover 15 years agoWe have a winner!!
I've read many stories on Literotica.
And I have to say this is the best I could find.
Hope to read more!!
Adrasteia_over 16 years agoAwesome story! I loved it! I agree that it should have a second part. Maybe with a foreword explaining a bit of what they have done, college, other partners etc and then when they're graduating or something. They should stay together though :] Not many couples do nowadays although it does happen now and again.
Like someone else said.. I liked his gentleness in how he acted towards her and how he thought about her too and not just himself. Most men are definitely not like that! Hope to see another story soon!
Anonymousalmost 17 years agovery enjoyable. nice, sweet and gentle story of an event we all will go thru in life if we are lucky. I liked particularly the gentleness of the male.. the concern for his girlfriend's feelings and physical well-being and for the possible consequences of their lovemaking. May all girls have similar worthy partners when their time comes.
barnabusalmost 18 years agoAuthorThanks for the comments. It takes work to maintain long term relationships! This is true of a marriage or a 'less formal' relationship! I'm pleased at the success of your group. It sounds like you're living a good life!
And I appreciate your feedback to me. Thank you.
Barnabus
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DesertPirateabout 18 years agoGlad your back writing again. There are very few who write in this style so you have been missed. Great story, it reminds me of some friends back in the 60's and into the 70's, the vacation in New England was an every even year thing. They went to different colleges and stayed apart for 2 years, with many letters and phone calls, and then he transfered to her school. It took him a year to arrange a scholarship to cover the difference in tuition. I'll give you a hint at the outcome - I got an invitation this week to their 30th anniversary party in July. Yes we have all stayed in touch for over 40 years, there were 10 of us that grew up "together" and death is the only thing that will keep me from missing this one, my health is great! Every one else in the group married someone from outside and beating all odds we have only one divorce. There is a 6 year spread in our ages with my 49 the youngest and a 23rd anniversary in Aug. the 2nd shortest marriage still together. One hell of a group!
Anonymousabout 18 years agoThanks! I guess the last two lines were kinda funny! They were intended for humor, but also they were intended as a realization of 'the facts of life' by a young person.
I guess sometimes reality and humor coincide.
Thanks for your note!
Barnabus
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