All Comments on 'Jeb & Nancy'

Great story. Good build up to it's climax.

There are a lot of possible roads this tale can take. I eagerly await the next several episodes.

women in the church do help men when they go through various crisis and this make this story very believable.

in the whole world I would rather see be made a cuckold than a fucking preacher. hope Nancy presents the reverend with a little bundle of joy for him to bring up as divorce and abortion would be out of the question. Very fucking good.

I really enjoyed reading about her sexual liberation...keep up the great work...I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Karebeargirl I have just added you to my favorite Literotica author list. This story was well done and was very erotic. I'm looking forward to reading many more of your stories. Once again,thank you!

Excellent start to what could become a mini-series, so many interesting possibilities. Please keep writing.

I really enjoyed this story and I would love to read more about it. Please keep up the good work.

What a great story...enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep more chapters coming.

You writing has a depth that is very satisfying, in the erotic and non-erotic parts of this story. I only saw one spelling error, but it's something a spell checker wouldn't catch. It did not take away from your story at all. You are a very good writer, keep writing.

I don't know how all those poeple could review this story as excellent, because it wasn't very good. It was very very slow to start and the dialog was strained. It ended well, but you had to have real balls to stay until the end. A great idea for a story, that could have and should have been a whole lot better.

Great Talent KareBear...I'd Love to exchange Ideas with you and a rather Lame Story I've Written...If You're Interested Email me at Little Bighorn@Webtv.net...Tommy

I agree with the other guy that it was not very well written. The idea and some of the description was good...but who wants to hear vagina over and over again? Use some better nouns and adjectives. Your grammar was off a bit as well. Overall, not a waste of time, but I was kind of disturbed that it had only been a week since she died...kinda upsetting. Keep writting though!

and thought it was hot. I can't wait for part 2

thanks

God, that made me orgasm just reading it.. :)

hot hot hot, but loads of spelling/grammatical errors!

I enjoyed this story but wouldn't want the author to come to my house! There is considerably more than a weeks worth of dust around here. Very sexy otherwise. I loved how she followed her natural inclination to explore the dildo with her mouth and other mouth and that when she continued her sexual exploration with Jeb. More about them please.