by JimBob44
I agree that you need to continue the story. Too many loose ends. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Needs more too tell what Jeff does to liberate the other 2 daughters
Could have used another page or so, maybe come back and do a fourth chapter some time.
I agree their needs to be more it's heart warming and smutty which leads to a great story and I really would like to continue to read more
finish writing the story or at least an epilogue I really enjoyed your writing it was excellent. This is my fifth time reading you Jeff Tait story and I am never disappointed. I hope you continue with many more story to come. Don't stop now!!
Oww. Laughed so hard to this chapter that I hurt myself. Great jokes. Really enjoyed this series and I am slowly reading all (mostly) your other stories.
Like the way the Story is going and see alot of Possibilities. Like Jeff catching the Little Asshole Brother Messing with his Car or Wife to be. it would serve the Lil Prick right to goto Jail.