All Comments on 'Jeff Thousandaire Ch. 02'

Deal with Melody, dude. Once and DONE. In her defense, you did break the Date; she had a right to be pissed off. However, her reaction was overblown especially in light of her dalliance with the other Guy, Ritchie. And while we're on the subject, the whole "fishing off the company dock" thing is fraught with peril, misery and grief even if the sex is great. And, remember, men (especially bosses) have NO defense.

Interesting read, I had enjoyed the John Billionaire series. Looking forward to more adventures of Jeff, the steel driving Architect.

You are one of my favorite authors on this site..... and you always amaze me with the 'Stories'

Keep up the AWESOME writing

This is very erotic but it threw me off to envision Kaitlin with red eyes like a rabbit. I'm glad to see the cast of John B again.

You know, I never knew that. I think I've gone the last ten years thinking vermillion meant a kind of green. Thanks for the heads up.

What a wonderfully intense love story, this is something those two both deeply deserved. With your writing talent it unfolded beautifully even if it is a little quick to feel completely real, but that makes it even better I think. Thank you for using your talent to create this series it is wonderful.

Your work is simply amazing and highly erotic. I can't even count the number of hours I have already spent reading your stories, and I'm not even through the first two of the John Billionaire story arc!

You use the word "vermillion" to mean, I believe, blue when you're describing Kaitlynn's eyes. The actual spelling of the word is vermilion, and it means a red color very close to scarlet. Sorry to be such a prig about the word, but I could not reconcile her eyes being red right then. Love your work though, VERY much.

Oh my fucking GOD, Melody is the biggest cunt in the series. What a two-faced, hypocritical BITCH

It's a real shame the hottest sex scene so far isn't even between John and Taylor... I'm actually pretty disappointed

So is Jeff just going to bang all of John's harem? You basically made Jeff take over John's personal life in his series. I like your writing but i am not a fan of some guy just coming in and fucking all of John's women.