by BuckyDuckman
Hot story but it was confusing to follow as you jumped to the conclusion too quickly and with no forewarning.
I agree with previous writers. She wanted her husband to give himself to another man, but then when he does so she calls him degrading names. Didn't like that. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the story.
This is the first comment I have posted after reading over a hundred stories. I liked the openness and love the first couple have and the way they develop. The woman have a chance to ease into new things much better than the men do. Dana pushed Joel too quickly from oral to anal and Jenna should not have degraded her husband with that diatribe of homophobic slurs while they experiment to the next level. It’s not quite the safe zone I would want to be in doing it for the first time. The end sounded like Jenna was pimping out Joel in the next scene. Very abrupt ending.
Cum kissing is very hot. Wished the guys shared a kiss too. Nice story and enjoyed it a lot.
Sounds like interesting lines to cross as long as everyone is in agreement.
Bucky
Joel is a seriously lucky man but I love Jenna's reaction to her husband losing his cherry. I was so hard reading the last couple of paragraphs, knowing what fun lay in store for both of them as Joel became her genuine cumslut for this night.
When can we expect "Jenna and Joel: Part II"?
I’m not gay or even bi but that was a well written and arousing story.
i wish you'd write a "Jenna and Joel" part 2. great story. well written and very erotic. thanks
Another good story marred by dumb mistakes like "Joel returned a moment later with the tube of lube and a condom for Joel. "
Enjoying many different times in the past with good sex friends of both genders. Being fucked in front of others or pegged had to be the hottest for me as well .. Excellent story, young sir...
What other people think doesn't matter. I thought it was a great story and I would like to see more bi sex in the stories, people read these to get horny or off, or both. I myself get horny and wish I had done more when I was younger. I have sucked a couple of cocks, because after you get to be my age the women don't want sex.
One of the best stories I've read in some time! Please write more, I'm not gay but find bi-sex very erotic. I hope you write more.
I love wife swapping stories were the husbands get it on with each other also!
I just love stories where both sexes get it on. It gets to me how people find g/g good but admit you like m/m sex you are sick. I really feel there is no difference between a women's mouth or ass and a mans. Please write more like this...
An orgy isn't an orgy if those lines aren't crisscrossed every which way. Keep up the grand work!
Man', wish my wife would be into this. we snowballed once but she quit. I'd love to suck a nice dick....swallowing that cum. I'm into eating my own when I jerk off...
I made the mistake of reading this story at work during lunch, at my desk. I had to keep putting it down to cool off, and adjust my pants. Hot!
THAT would have been a perfect title. Did I miss Joel sucking Pete? And I would have enjoyed more about how Joel felt getting fucked. Maybe next chapter?
We loved your story. Anytime we get togather with other couples they are bi too.
Nothing like the taste of pussy and cock.
Great story. Beautifully written and horny as hell. And now I am too! Horny as hell that is.
Since I have fantasized about bisexuality, I found myself wishing that I was Joel.
Really one of the best stories I have ever read on this site!
You did a great job keeping a story, characterization, and believability while moving things along nicely. Very well done, thank you for sharing! *****
I just wished you hadn't included the derogatory remarks. One (and I know) can be bi without liking degrading remarks and adjectives. All our sex is as equals and that feels so much better. But thanks for a hot story!
Damn, DreamerIncolore - that's HIGH praise! I wrote this story because of forum thread about a woman who wanted to see her husband suck another man. As the thread evolved, it became clear she wanted to try being with another woman, too. Thank you again!
I to loved you story,the fact that the women and men were on the same wave leangth,made it all the better,always wanted to try it .
I am going to pay the ultimate compliment here: "Damn... I wish I had written that."
5 stars.