by jealouscuck
Excellent Storyline.... Pretty well written... Just needs proofreading and correction- some glaring and confusing typos, etc... Otherwise... Totally HOTTttt
If you would like an experienced proofreader to assist you... just respond to me and ask... Glad to help out.....
And to the Naysayers... They always seem to hide behind the ANONYMOUS moniker... Not enough balls to show their "face"
Love your stories, nothing better than eating cream pie from a freshly fucked Pussey, keep the stories coming.