All Comments on 'Jenni Goes to Daddy Ch. 10'

by Hisscarlett

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libertarianlibertarianover 15 years ago
Daddy

Oh man you are really pushing my patience. There is a real need for the weekend scene where Jenni really becomes his wife and slave!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hotter than the sun

I have never craved a story so much! MORE! MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
loosing interest

great story and loved reading it, but when i get a chance to check thru out the week theres not updates, Im loosing interest....plz post soon....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
lost

wont read anymore lost interest in waiting...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More???

I really liked your writing, but I was very disappointed when your story was not finished. You tempted your readers with this "weekend" and "future teaching" for your characters and then dropped the story line. Are you going to add any more chapters? Sure hope so.

TaraKokaTaraKokaover 14 years ago
More! Please.

Are you gonna finish this story? I enjoyed it and would like to see how it progresses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Honest to goodness stroke writing

Loved it .....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Great story! Needs to finish - so don't stop now!

He has to get her pregnant!

AlphaWolfMAlphaWolfMover 13 years ago

where is the rest of the story??? This is a Great Story but it needs a finish.

stormy0628stormy0628over 13 years ago

I hope you finish this story. I love it

SamanthaA123SamanthaA123almost 11 years ago
Need More

Please.. post more... i wanna know what happins next...if her mum catches them.. what happins at the dinner.. how she reacts to the balls!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nooooooo!

This can't be!!!! This is one heck of a good story. I was truly immersed.

50580964555058096455over 8 years ago
wOw

So what happens next between the father mother and Jenni?

IceWoman73IceWoman73almost 8 years ago
More...

More please! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Awesome writing.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakabout 6 years ago
WELL???? 10 years???

So this story was written 10 years ago and it still has no ending? I've deleted it and you from my favorites. I hate it when a story is built up and then left hanging. NOT the way to gain popularity as a writer!! What a waste of my time reading all this just to be left hanging. HIGHLY disappointed!!!

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 4 years ago
*****

It needs to be continued!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Love the story . It needs a true ending now . Not leave

everyone hanging out there . Do not drop the on this one'

One last story bringing it all together.

Great so far.

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