by Hisscarlett
Oh man you are really pushing my patience. There is a real need for the weekend scene where Jenni really becomes his wife and slave!
great story and loved reading it, but when i get a chance to check thru out the week theres not updates, Im loosing interest....plz post soon....
I really liked your writing, but I was very disappointed when your story was not finished. You tempted your readers with this "weekend" and "future teaching" for your characters and then dropped the story line. Are you going to add any more chapters? Sure hope so.
Are you gonna finish this story? I enjoyed it and would like to see how it progresses.
Great story! Needs to finish - so don't stop now!
He has to get her pregnant!
where is the rest of the story??? This is a Great Story but it needs a finish.
Please.. post more... i wanna know what happins next...if her mum catches them.. what happins at the dinner.. how she reacts to the balls!!!!!
This can't be!!!! This is one heck of a good story. I was truly immersed.
More please! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Awesome writing.
So this story was written 10 years ago and it still has no ending? I've deleted it and you from my favorites. I hate it when a story is built up and then left hanging. NOT the way to gain popularity as a writer!! What a waste of my time reading all this just to be left hanging. HIGHLY disappointed!!!
Love the story . It needs a true ending now . Not leave
everyone hanging out there . Do not drop the on this one'
One last story bringing it all together.
Great so far.