All Comments on 'Jennifer's Revenge'

Makes a terrible marriage.

If Bill have any balls he would take quick action and get out of there if if he is nude.

WOW!!!! That made my pussy so friggin wet that I damn near came on myself without even having to touch my own pussy. You have one hell of an art for story telling. Two VERY enthusiatic thumbs up!!

maybe there's a lot I've been missing, but somehow this just doesn't sound like fun!

dear wifey has pushed it just a bit too far. the ex and her being the dominant one. her forgiveness and getting things back on par, too high a price. broken deal and just leave her/them.

How does a gay story get in the loving wives category? If somebody likes that kind of shit, no biggie, but it sure doesn't belong here!

By idiot writer.

I suppose women will get a charge out of this story. I should say, some women, rather than generalize. As for the story, the writing is lackluster and somewhat stilted. Although I'm not a fan of such a theme, if it had been better written I'd have at least found more of an interest in reading it.

As a fantasy, I'm sure it'll have its fans, both men and women, who will no doubt pelt this with adoration as they kneel shackled at the feet of their masters/mistresses.

loved it and so did my lady. we are swingers and she has afew lovers for when I'm away. but I know about them and have met them too. think he is getting what he deservers. lets have more to this story. hope she makes him her full time slave. and dose more then the exhusband on this weekend afew very big ones.

At the very least, she's getting divorced. At the very best, she's going to jail for illegal restraint, kidnapping and sexual assault. Enjoy! Glad to see you never finished this junk.

Another failed author

And an unfinished crock too! The minute she releases him, he left. Came back the next day when she was out, packed everything he wanted, stopped by the bank to take all the money, cancel the credit cards and started to drive his way across the country. Since he didn't plan on getting married. He never bothered with a divorce. He left that for the bitch.

JUST AWFUL!

Please don't continue!

I don't know what to say

I liked the story

He beat Todd to a pulp and then threw them both out of the house. His house. He's the Dom. Trying to play his game failed. There's always another sub. She ended up with nothing but her clothes. The end to this stupidity. Awful story

the bitch just wanted to have another man so she used whatever excuse he could find if he had been smart when she slapped him in the hotel that would have been the time to walk out tell her to fuck herself and leave the bitch

Bill called the police. Given the abrasions on his wrists from the handcuffs, Jennifer and Todd were arrested. Realizing he was in serious trouble, Todd testified against Jennifer and she was convicted and sent to jail. Bill divorced her while she was in jail and kept 80% of the marital assets. Jennifer got what she deserved. Stupid, unbelievable story.

As soon as Bill saw the other,naked man then got slapped hard a couple of times he should have turn-tailed and run. Jennifer reminded me of that Dixie Chick turd Natalie Maines ,I kept picturing Todd as the fucked up brother Todd in the movie Wedding Crashers,and Bill looking like Bill Murray in Caddy Shack. Not a sexy bunch at all! ~ NO interest at all in reading a Chapter 2 of this steaming pile of camel crap!

Toddy gonna get fucked up when husband gets loose. Whore better run away fast. This is one lousy fantasy.

The twat’s behavior and attitude toward Cheatin’ Bill in the weeks leading up to her “revenge” coupled with that response she smirked after he asked if they’d stay together “If you still want to after what I have planned” should have been enough for him to cut his loses and just dump her. Certainly the hard smacks to his face after seeing a naked man with her in the room should have had him leaving and just ending it with the evil bitch.

It was just awful writing. And I think two things happen. When she tries to stick Todd's dick in Bill's mouth, Bill bites whatever part gets in - OFF. That brings the police and the ambulance and sends his wife to jail and Todd to the hospital and then jail. Illegal restraint, assault, battery, sexual assault and a raft of other charges sees Jennifer in jail and Bill getting a divorce and keeping all the marital assets. Even if everything happens per the story, at the end when they release him, he calls the police and has them both arrested. Either way Jennifer and Todd do considerable jail time and Bill walks away smiling. Lousy story made worse by the fact that you didn't finish it.

1 star

Call the police. Have them arrested. Divorce the whore. Easy peasy, lemon squeezy.