All Comments on 'Jenny and Carrie Ch. 03'

where's the sex, the story is.. ok but its way too much telling whats happening and not enough showing what is happening.. also you put it in the lesbian catagory.. but there doesn;t seem to be much lesbian theme

Yes I know it's long and I did put it in the right Category. But Jenny and CArrie are 13!!!! right now. And I don't know about you but any type of sex at that age is WRONG!!! It will pick up but, there is one part that takes place to them andthen that's when it gets sexy. If you like watching kiddie porn, you won't find it here.

Again, I like the story and how it is progressing, but again I feel the need to mention the issue of proofreading. I will mention other things in a private note, but might I say here that although I realize the story is about the girls, it seems as if the boys are being virtually ignored. They are shuffled off elsewhere while Claude and Ross go abroad to deal with the problems there. Nothing of how they feel beyond Jenny's new look after the hair appointment is even mentioned, including how they feel about the girls' swimming and golf, etc. Do they even care? What is going on in THEIR lives?

ho BTW ..

I actually had sex at 13 myself ...

not saying it's the thing to do though it just happened

extreme levels of hormones + opportunity leads to this

it's more frequent than you think