All Comments on 'Jenny and Carrie Ch. 07'

It is time for you to learn a new trade......perhaps crochet or scrapbooking.

Seriously.....why is this story submitted in this category?? In fact, why is it even on this site???

This chapter was a bit anticlimactic after the drama in Chapter 6, but once again is shown the resiliency of our heroines. After the gang rape, this room destruction is relatively pretty mild, but it is easy to see how Jenny and Carrie can be scared, all things considered. However, I am glad to see them reaching out to the proper sources for help instead of trying to take care of things themselves. A good sign of growth.

I like the way the perps tripped themselves up and the punishment meted out. The only thing I question somewhat is telling the 3 perps the intimate private stuff that Jenny and Carrie had gone through; however, doing so did have the desired effect. Lynn and her co-conspirators do have a lot to learn and a lot of growing up to do.

To our anonymous person who doesn't like this story, might I just suggest that there are myriad other stories on this site to choose from.

Yes, this story could be in the non-erotic section, but Jenni has indicated numerous times what her intentions are for this story and why she has put it in the lesbian sex section. I can wait several more chapters, if need be, before sex is introduced.

Peace

Ok I generally don't bother with people who make foolish and derogatory comments but I have had enough!

Ever heard of the saying "Those who can do those who can't teach"? Well personally I find the comment an insult to teachers who give their all for their students so I wish to modify the saying "Those who can write those who can't make jealous comments"!

It is often hard to find a story to loose yourself in. Even harder to find one that seems so credible. The characters are lovable, believable, and portray good morals and values which is a rare combination.

For those with biased, negative, comments with no basis in the critical literary thinking I suggest you write something to prove your worthiness to comment in this field. However I suspect the reason that won't happen may have to do with a lack of literary understanding, talent, imagination and truth.

To the author: Well done your writing is improving and I love the development of the stories and the characters. Hope you get help with editing soon. Having someone as a soundboard can really help an author.

Congrats on another great work!

I'm thankful for everyone who has taken the time to read and also for those who have replied to my stories ( and yes the bad replies too). What anonymous said doesn't bother me, I knew going in that I would have bad reviews, but that only strives to make me better. Btw, I did have some passing sex in ch 9, but had to take it out so i could get it approved, it wasn't graphic, but seeing Jenny and Carrie are still 16, Lit wouldn't allow it.