All Comments on 'Jenny Plays with the Big Girls Ch. 09'

You wrote that the girls just came from a soccer tournament. You said it 2 times to Sawyers. But the girls have been playing beach VOLLEYBALL, not SOCCER. Big difference.

PS. I wish that you would continue the series. The end of chapter 10 does not seem like the final ending of the story. I love what you have written so far in the series.

RJ