All Comments on 'Jens Delights Ch. 01'

by deadeye_76

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

some problems...

with english, but otherwise hot. author obviously unaware of the meanings of the verbs ¨to lie¨ and ¨to lay¨. i'll let HIM look that up, elementary that it is. a self edit (re-reading by writer) might likely find the obvious typos, unnecessary commas and such.

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