All Comments on 'Jessica Ch. 07'

interesting very interesting very creative and no typos. GOOD writing all the way around.

I'm not really into science fiction but thought this one was really great. Good job!

what happened, come on i want to know. It is so hot. what is going to happen to her, does she turn or does she die.

Does she get turned, that was so mean I love them they have to be together! *anime eyes* Can you pretty pretty please make an alternate ending?

Does Jessica get turned or die?? I hope not the later.. Those two belong together.. Please tell what happens afterwards.. Make it so she becomes His for eternity...

Does Jessica get turned or die?? I hope not the later.. Those two belong together.. Please tell what happens afterwards.. Make it so she becomes His for eternity...

Does Jessica get turned or die?? I hope not the later.. Those two belong together.. Please tell what happens afterwards.. Make it so she becomes His for eternity...

does jessica live or die? such a good series, i really hope there is more.

Okay the end completely doused the flames that were building up in me and now i don't feel like cumming more just like crying.... i guess it's for the best that i didnt cum, my Lord would have beaten my ass raw.

He cared so much for her he killed her and then just moved on, how pitiful. You could have done so much more with that story.

Should have been under Erotic Horror. That is where the snuff porn belongs.

Vey well written. I enjoyed every word.

What a fucking let down!

I find myself leaving an anonymous comment on a long ago concluded story; however, I can't let this writing style go uncommended. Succinct, sadistic, and oh so sexy. I rarely read a story that can establish what so many forget to include: a plot! Let alone that plot being established in so few pages. Would love more of your mini stories, but I appreciate the two that have been offered.

Also, *spoiler alert* he leaves her dead. She chose that fate for herself. If anything, Adrian at least mitigated the torture for information with sexual gratification. Not the typical happy ending, but who wouldn't want their time to come whilst in the throws of carnal ecstasy. Sign me up 😉