All Comments on 'Jet's First Double'

Why idiots who obviously don't like the idea of anal sex choose to read a story about double penetration is a mystery.

A good story, well written, if a bit short. The only "problem" with the story, per se, is the ease with which the woman in the story takes two men at once for the first time. I've never known it to be that easy at first, but experiences vary and I understand the need for creative license for the flow of the story.

Overall, well done.

This was a little short, from the minimal character development to the sexual build-up and execution. It almost seemed rushed.

The overall theme was pretty good and the setting believable; it's just that the author didn't really take the time to make this story great. Still, if you like to read about quiet girls that go wild, this works.