All Comments on 'Jewels in a Sultan's Hareem Ch. 02'

by Maggie Red Rose

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good but...

you shouldn't have the girl say Allah, this story predates the advent of Islam in its time period. also, what is with the italic words?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
So good! Different background made it fantastic.

A great departure from the standard series of settings and characters we see all the time.

Really, really good. Loved it!

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