All Comments on 'Jezebel's Tale Ch. 24'

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Wildwood55Wildwood55almost 2 years ago

"She smiled remembering that in the past her inner succubus tendencies had played hell with relationships in the past, jealousy, anger, and hurt feelings. With Sandy all that is in the past now, the Witch..."

Are you trying to say it all was, 'in the past'?

You might get by with the 1st & last, though it would be best to only use the 1st 'in the past', but the 2nd was what really put things over the top.

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