- Incest/Taboo
- Jimmy and Jaclyn
- Comments
All Comments on 'Jimmy and Jaclyn'
by L.A. Wicker
- 24 Comments
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoa hot story but i agree not everything has be so large. it is a turn off in stories.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI think you did a fantastic job leading up to their making love. I would like to see you continue with this story and Jaclyn gets pregnant from her brother.
justme601000almost 16 years agoThe "surprise" ending opens new doors! Is there more to this story? There should be!
Anonymousabout 15 years agogood but what is your obsession with over sized tits and dicks it is totally unnecessary and ruins a good story it seems like you are over compensating for something
Anonymousover 13 years agouse a good editor please and keep better track of what you write when jimmy woke up in his sisters bed you say he put his pants on yet when he went to her room the night before all he had on was a towel so were did the pants come from magic i guess also do some research no way could he have been plowing four feet deep no tractor could do it and if they did the tractor would sink in the dirt after when they tried to plant it these goofs really kill a good story
toby9790over 12 years agoYet again, another great story from L.A. Wicker. I really liked this story, it was just as good as all the other great incest stories he's writen.5***** toby9790.
subman571almost 12 years agoI don't know what it was my friend but this story really got the blood pumping. Please pat yourself on the back. You outdid yourself-Will
Anonymousover 11 years agotypical for this writer doesn't use an editor and fails to fix errors that are already pointed out. if the webmasters did their jobs we would have a lot better quality stories to read and would enjoy it a whole lot more.
kansas_dudeover 11 years agoYou could have used a spell checker on this story but it's a great story :)
bgblacknylonslvrover 10 years agoThat was an ending to outdo all others what a fucking twist that nobody saw coming
Anonymousover 10 years agoa great story of blossoming love between brother and sister...the end was a hoot about her mom having her brothers baby and then saying she was married to her uncle and she wants them to have a baby soon....loved it...you just cannot beat fucking your sister or mom or aunt or granny...keep it in the family....go for it...
Anonymousabout 10 years agoit's even greater when he blows his brotherly balls up inside her and fucks a baby up his sis's adorable little cunt. Jimmy's so cute--when mom and dad tell the kids they want a grandchild from their constant fucking, he assures his folks he'll start working on that right away.
Anonymousabout 9 years ago"Love is strange;" so goes the song. Intimate life such as this can be true. . .I know this for a fact.
Kookaburra8over 7 years agoMust agree with Anon (needs an editor) 08/ 28/10 and Anon (needs a rewrite)10/26/12. With this story BUT I've read quite a few of your stories now and it's a shame that you don't listen to the comments left by your readers which you ask for. You yourself have acknowledged the fact that your spelling, grammar etc is not up to par and needs an editor yet from your very first story you have written up until this one you still refuse to use one. WHY????????. You shown readers what a truly talented writer you are. Most of your storylines I read were quite good including this one and could have easily been Hall of Famers. Just image what an editor could have done to make those stories even better. It's quite sad for you and frustrating for us...still gave you 4 stars for this..
Anonymousover 7 years agoEnjoyed the story, though it was a quick ending! Thought we would get some more sex in before they were caught!
...also I was kind of ...disappointed? ...with him taking her the first time. I loved it and was totally on board with the kinky pinning her to the bed so he could nail her, hehehe! ...but then he just slides in all easy as pie! No comments about a hymen to break or it already being broken, no obvious pain when he shoves that big dick in her either, just seemed off.
The story was light and fun otherwise! Thanks :)
Anonymousabout 5 years agoOf all your stories, that I've read, this is without doubt the best of all. I loved the exciting build-up and it was so tasteful that I had to continue reading until the very end. I wish you'd write a continuation of this story.
