All Comments on 'Jimmy Palatine'

Quite a long story with a flashback of a guy fucking his wife. Doesn't sound like incest to me. It ended with a hanger. A heads-up that it was a two-parter would have been appreciated.

Now to go look for a story that is what it purports to be.

good story wrong section unless there is more

what the fuck kind of incest story is that. that has to be the sorriest story that i have ever read, incest or not.

belongs in the fantacy area since it was all flash back which is fantacy afterall no incest no taboo just another wannabe writer that can't put a story in the right area