All Comments on 'Johnny Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good but messy.

It's lose not loose and I'm sure some of the words didn't fit their description.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loose?

Lose his hair.

Loose is when something isn't tight.

jane marwoodjane marwoodabout 12 years ago
A five star story... loved it!

A sequel is definitely needed. Lovely work.

jeffrey214jeffrey214about 15 years ago
very nice indeed

just wonderful! we must have more! now that the young man has been introduced to the wonders of maternal/loving care of his genitals, he certianly needs continual supervision and guidance!!

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UPDATE JULY 2019: My long absence from writing erotica may finally be coming to an end. Writer's block and a heavy work load had conspired against me, but things are better now. I hope to upload 2 new stories by Xmas! I try to answer every fan/e-mail I get in a timely manner...

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