by Daniellekitten
A very promising start suppose i had better go find my nail strengthener this is going to be another cliff hanger .
Yet another great story from you. I don't know how you do it, but you do.
I think i remember this story, well the begining of it anyway! hehe! I liked it! It was a good start! Please more! Thanks!!
What a fantastic start to a story! I love all your stories and I especially love the mysterious nature of this one. It's the first chapter and I'm already on the edge of my seat! Can't wait for more of this and your other stories! Thanks for writing!
Just as creepy the first time I read it. Hope you finish this story soon.
Excellent start. Kept me at the edge of my seat. You did a great job of conveying the feelings this girl has probably of whether she is crazy or not b/c of these events. Who is the guy in her dreams? I can't wait for more.
Great story and I do like your writing; but it bothered me that the priest rubbed her shoulders. That made me wince. I mean really, who goes up to a stranger--even if the stranger is upset like she was--and starting with rubbing their shoulders? If someone did that to me I would jump out of my skin. Way inappropriate invasion of personal space.