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Anonymousover 13 years agoGood Start
Too short from my point of view but nice start. Editing could be a little tighter but that will come with experience. Well done and I look forward to the next chapter!
nomoretears00over 13 years agoGood start
The story has a good hook and I want to know more lol! It was short, but it made for a good introduction.
Spadger2over 6 years ago???????????????????????
Could not work out where this was going - if anywhere?
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