All Comments on 'Jon Starting Over Ch. 01'

Even more excited about this story after reading Chapter 1- I'm hooked already! This stuff is seriously addictive and I can't wait for more! Half in love with Jasper already...

ps- please don't worry about your editing skills. You're doing great!

The attraction between them is so thick you could cut it with a knife! I'm hoping because you said its part of 12 chapters, that they are all already written =D. . Can't wait for the next one.

I can't wait to read more......You are going to have me checking the new stories everyday looking for the next chapter to this story :) HURRY!!! LOL

Hope these come each day. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep them coming.

This just keeps getting better and better! Oh, I can't wait to read what you have...this is just wonderful!

Normally, I don't mind a few misspellings here and there, but there are so many I've had trouble keeping things straight... Had to go back and reread the first two chapters because I was so confused.

A check for proper pronoun use would do wonders.

I was close to not reading further, but I'm intrigued so I'm going to keep reading.

Please, Bill - please finish this series.