Jon Starting Over Ch. 01

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"Ward round," Eddie said smiling.

"Ward round." He nodded and walked toward the door. Though, Eddie's long strides had him there first opening it for Jon.

"Oh, I don't have my new ID badge yet. Is that going to matter?"

Eddie angled his head. "I think everybody is going to know who you are." He took his own ID badge out of his coat pocked and clipped it on. It had his picture on it, his name and title. "Everyone should have theirs on so you'll be able to learn their names, ranks, and serial numbers." He chuckled at his own joke but Jonathan hadn't really heard what he'd said as his eyes were intent on Eddie's badge.

"Jasper? Your name is Jasper?"

"Yes, Jasper Edwards."

"Jasper Edwards?" He said the name slowly and then closed his eyes and shook his head. "You're Jasper Edwards?"

"Is something wrong?"

"You don't by any chance happen to have a couple of gorgeous four-year-old daughters with lovely blonde ringlets and blue eyes called Lilly and Lola, do you?"

Jasper's puzzled expression slid from his face to be replaced by total incredulity, his eyes wide with disbelief, yet he kept his voice controlled and calm. "How on Earth do you know that?"

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Please, Bill - please finish this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A Ton of Typos...

Normally, I don't mind a few misspellings here and there, but there are so many I've had trouble keeping things straight... Had to go back and reread the first two chapters because I was so confused.

A check for proper pronoun use would do wonders.

I was close to not reading further, but I'm intrigued so I'm going to keep reading.

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
oh my goodness!

This just keeps getting better and better! Oh, I can't wait to read what you have...this is just wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
you had to stop there?!!

Hope these come each day. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excited

I can't wait to read more......You are going to have me checking the new stories everyday looking for the next chapter to this story :) HURRY!!! LOL

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