by sugarsweet1259
Hi! Just found your blog..and discovered you were here as well! I do love this story and whatever the negative stuff people have written, I think it's a great yarn and full of good ideas....sequel soon, please!
Usually when I read a historical porn story, I expect historical ACCURACY. Panties, modern names (Murray Ellis? Really?), etc. This isn't accurate.
It probably isn't wise or smart to expect accuracy from a porn story, but shit like the aforementioned things really ruin the immersion.
Do your homework next time.
It was going okay until we got to "beef curtains" and then "fuck meat". Seriously?