All Comments on 'Jordan Cums of Age Ch. 02'
by MagicWand
- 8 Comments
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoThe whole story in bold text is bad form/style and should be redone to use standard text, and only bold for important places.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoBold print for a story deserving small print. Like dozens of others and lacking in merit, plus it was poorly written and edited (if it was edited at all).
Anonymousover 13 years agoPoorly written and very unbeliveable, only thing missing was talking about the 9-12" cocks...but thank god you didn't, it was bad enough
Anonymousabout 8 years agoand dull, too. Please don't write any more, you just don't have enough command of basic composition and storytelling skills to do it well, find another hobby. No stars
screedbearover 7 years agoWell I'm not as harsh as Anonymous, but this series wasn't that good.
You do have one reason the forget Anonymous comments, he/she wont create a user name to stand behind.
Anonymousover 7 years agoBringing in the three jerks from the garage into the story ended it for me. Some people don't have any taste at all.
The old fart
Olebillover 6 years agoYou put this under incest when in should have been under orgy. I quit reading before the end . thought this was going to be a good story between siblings not every dick around.
