All Comments on 'Jordan's Mommy Ch. 02'

by lusty Vamp

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15marsh15marshabout 13 years ago
AWSOME

Love of mother/daughter,Cruelty of a mistress, .....Awsome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
When is the rest of the story coming out?

I loved reading this story now I want to know when the rest is coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
So much more

You are masterfully having Jordan search and bring out Mommy's real self and making mom face facts. This could be a very long and award winning story based on what is found out and the accomplices Jordan can bring in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What is next?

When are we going to get more? I love the domination of daughter over mommy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved it

realy love this story of a daughter owning her mother like this. when can we have the rest of the story and is her son going to feature in it at some point when he return`s hope we don`t have to wait to long

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
get an editor

"Dominate" is a verb. "Dominant" is an adjective. Learn the difference, or Mistress might...

Teresa in Monterey

siralexsiralexabout 12 years ago
Typos aside, very nice story

Typos are always a problem, and most likely an inevitable one, but they really don't distract from your delightful story. I await your Ch. 03 in this story

GoodBitchGoodBitchalmost 12 years ago

Damn, Jordan makes a good Mistress. This was awesome.

heavyg15heavyg15about 11 years ago
Great

Jordan is a very cruel MIstress. Mommy is a great obedient Slut More Please Lusty. You are the best

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is absolutely one of the most engrossing and exciting stories of this ilk here...

Do not, under any circumstances, stop writing this story. You hopefully have many, many more chapters of this wonderfully disrespectful but loving pair.

Keep expanding the horizons and make mom truly become subservient to Jordan, even creating her own ways to show her respect and total love.

We are expecting lots from you and your mind and are sure you can deliver.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Master Ace

I like to read more about this slut.

strictmaster12880SWBstrictmaster12880SWBabout 10 years ago
You haven't written

Id love to see more, but please get an editor for your small errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Anxiously awaiting more adventures from Jordan and her Mommy

Love it and we need some conclusions here....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story

Great story love to read more on this keep up the great job.

MisGMisGover 6 years ago
More

I enjoyed your story very much, my college room mate was very sub, when she got married then divorced some years later her daughter having talked to me and another one of her room mates found out her mum was very sub, submissive and easy to control. From there my friend has spent her time at home in her daughters service

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very nice story

Very nice story i definitely would like to read more of it including the brother and daughters friends plus some outside play to but please more story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Brilliant Story...Needs to be Continued

Awesome Story Bro...Very Realistic..Never felt it was rushed as is the problem with most stories...Clearly this series has the potential to be one of the best not only in literotica but in this genre as a whole....Continue the chapters man....this series deserves it

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good start for a story

I definitely like to read more about what happens to mommy in this like when the young master gets home and how the daughter treats her in front of friends !

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71about 3 years ago
It was going so well!

Please write more. Jordan is just getting into her stride as a Domme!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jordan will have Mommy fuck her boyfriends and lick her girlfriend's pussies. Son Alan comes home, enjoys sharing bed with his 37 year old Mommy with camera filming their intercourses. Passions get stronger and Mommy is impregnated and Mistress Jordan breaks a Cheshire cat grin for all time. Jordan keeps up the humiliation of her mother while increasing her food intake to feed her unborn baby and put her on a strict diet after baby is born via hiring a black woman to become her midwife. Jordan whispers to the midwife how racist she is and allows her to explore Christina's sensuous body to make the white slut explore her strong, muscular black pussy and tits to convert her into a submissive bisexual lesbian.

Black Midwife makes Christina earn every privilege of assistance she will need by making sure Christina satisfy her needs before the baby is born

Baby born and Christina becomes a submissive slave to her black Midwife. They move to the ghetto and leave house to both Jordan and Alan to divide after it is sold. Christina and her black lover become a couple be and Christina starts sampling BBC before delivering another black baby.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

story and most commenters sick!!

Bigmanl12345Bigmanl123455 months ago

Looking forward to reading more. You have a very go start. Thank you for your posting

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