All Comments on 'Journey to Carlin'

brilliant. absolutely bloody brilliant. some of the best writing on the net.

will ther be a part 2?

Start writing another; after 9 years you must have some more ideas!

Excellent story, hope to see more.

I seem to remember that there was another story from you in the same setting - about a wizard, the leader of the band Ukko and Abby are in?

Nice writing, good tension, good action.

Please write more as you have time.

Nice balance between action and er ... action if you see what I mean. Let's have some more soon

Great story. I;d love to see more of it. I think it was really well written and not too overdone.

I really liked this story, the way you went into the two characters' psyches. Not sure what the woman was (half-elven?) but it worked well.

One obvious spelling mistake: "He reigned in his horse" it should be "reined" unless he's ruling his mighty steed. ;)

Really enjoyed reading this story, just glad I happened upon it. There were several words that caused me to pause because they were used wrong, something spell check wouldn't catch. Even with that it still rates five stars. Maybe you've gone on to other interests but it would be nice to read more stories about those two. I'm counting on them having a happy ending with lots more action in between. Thanks

I remember when these were first posted to UseNet. Please repost the rest of them.