All Comments on 'Journey to OZ Ch. 01'

Keep writing more!!

Oh my god... my pussy is on fire!

You need to finish this series, it's sooooo hot!

Love, another dirty Dorothy

Just read this great story (Yes I know I'm a bit late).

It's been done before but this is my favourite version. Great writing style.

Please continue. I want to see what happens next.

Thanks,

brian358

When are you going to finish this story? It's one of the best!

One of the very best stories on the site, Journey to Os should have been finished long ago! This story has more possibilities to explore, and should be completed, perhaps as a novella. Please consider finishing it.

I agree. This is one of the best stories on the site, yet for some reason was never completed. It should be done as a novella. Surprisingly few stories have been done about naive busty girls but who at the same time love sex. Please complete Journey to Os!

An incomplete story by a very good writer. Easily the best Oz story on the site, and should be completed in Novella form.

...you started this storyline.

Why not give some thought to continuing?

That was brilliantly written and very entertaining. Hopefully you will add more even though it's been so long. In the next installment I think the magician should teach her the magic trick of having her ass cheeks spread wide and him thoroughly licking, sucking and tongue fucking her tight tasty anus until she comes. 5 stars.

Really good. Please write more. Excellent.