All Comments on 'Joyride'

It was so incredibly hot, and at the same time, really sweet and romantic.

Keep up the excellent writing!

I have to say that I haven't read all of the stories on this site, I've read quite a few of them, and this has to be one of the top five that I've read. Doesn't seem to be as long as it actually is because it sucks you in, and don't let you go until the last word. Awsome story keep it up.

Great story! I've never responded to a story before, but I had to this time because it totally turned me on! Can't wait for your next story!

This is the best story that I have read on Literotica in a long long time. Hope to see allot more from you!!!

Thank you so much for allowing me to live the story with them in your writing.

This was one of the best stories I have read here.

I felt for them as she left her, and also shed tears with her.

It is a wonderful story please continue to write more on them if possible.

Lucky, I had no idea. I am so glad I read this. You are a fine writer, m'dear. Very good characterization, good narrative and dialogue; all so believably lovely. "Real" erotica. Congrats! Perdita

I love this story, it's hot, it has depth and well motorcycles. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

It is now official. Anytime I come across one of your stories it is going to be read, saved, and treasured!

!!!!!!

Made me want to take up riding motorcycles! Very hot, very exciting.

I'm a sucker for a good erotic love story, and this is one of the best I've read. Encore, please!

Reading you is like experiencing an orgasm. The words start slow, build up - teasing and teasing the reader, move up and up and up to a shattering explosion and then a warm aftermath for long minutes afterwards. And then it starts again... Oh My God!

I loved it, L. It thrilled me in innumerable places, disappointed me in others (but only because I expected more), wrung my heart out and then made me feel happy and warm and fresh with the ending. More than everything it sucked me into it totally and it has been a while since I enjoyed a story this much on Lit. It's got into my top reads here.

I couldn't put it down.

I loved this story!!! Your writing is brilliant, and this story felt almost...personal. I could visualize every moment with startling clarity. Keep up the good work!

This story is absolutely one of my favorites, Lucky!! You're very talented, sweetheart. Would love to joy ride some more!

Lucky, sweetie, that was amazing! So hot and yet you make the switch to sweet and emotional so smoothly! Love and very very hot scenes (not all of which were sex) the perfect combination, plus a good storyline....Wow!

*hugs*

Lucky,

Great blend of heart pounding excitement and tender romance. A great ride (and read) all the way.

Lime

PS - The sex was good too.

This was a hot, vivid, beautifully written story that made me want to read it again and again. Loved the imagery, the language, and the development of the story. This is really excellent, and I can't wait to read more of your work!!! What a wonderful piece of erotica

Fine job, Lucky. The rides were a great prelude to the sex. And the emotions you put into it showed. The emotions I got out of it are showing now so I'm off the the shower. :D

Keep up the good work.

... with you is truly a joy (a wickedly hot joy, at that). What a great story, lucky!

~Imp

This one will get your motor running. Good story, good writing, good job, Lucky. This one's a five.

Ok, usually I don't leave comments when I'm reading stories, but yours I had to. Your story was incredible. Lustful and romantic. Thank you.

Thanks for the ride, Lucky! This is one of the most well-crafted stories I have read in along time. Great characters, lusty and real!

Dear Lucky,

What a delicious story. Makes me want to start riding a bike. A great build up, romance and incredible sex. And all written with skill and craftsmanship and care. Thanks.

Patti

omg this is awesome! It is so..Good! I love it!!

long......but the level of detail was astonishing. Great great job lucky....great job.

I am still drolling! By far this is THE BEST love story I have ever read. I have to tell you, the visuals have haunted me all week! :) I can't wait to read more of your writings!

Well deserved honors, lucky! ~Imp

I loved this story, i has heart and a great plot which is lacking in so many others. Now i need to find me a women with a bike. Thanks for the great story.

...just wow

OMGGGGGG!!!! What a story!!! This is by far the best one I have read on here.

This was REALLY well-written. I can tell you put a lot of work into making this story as incredible as it is. The language is brilliant, the characters are amazing, the love feels so real, and the sex scenes are extraordinary and unbelievably hot. Congratulations and I cannot wait to read more of your submissions. I also liked how long the story was, it was the perfect length. So often I'm disappointed because just as I get into the story and the characters, it ends. Yours felt just right. Thank you so much!

Ginger

This story had everything you could ask for. My favorite parts were the spats and competitions between Tina and Valerie, but the love making, love story, and sexy characters were great too. As Valerie would say, it was "incredible" and you are an "incredible" writer. Can't wait to read your other stories. Gerry

That hasn't already been said! This is fantastic, wonderful, so well written. Cant wait to read more. Did I love it? Absofuckinglutely!!!

It's the best so far!! Great great great job. Love the story, love the characters. Keep writing. You're talented. :)

Incredibly written with interesting, believable characters that follow a wonderful story. A few editing errors along the way, but by and large one of the better stories I've ever written

I love your writing style... the motorcycles were sexy! I've never felt the need to comment before but I hope you continue writing.

Loved your style and class. You've ridden bikes or have been very close to someone who has. Your writing got my juices going and reminded me that I miss riding... bikes too! I echo all the other positive reviews, so I won't repeat them. Your descriptions of their attraction hurt me - made me ache and brought up tears several times. I felt their pain and later their bliss and I'm jealous of them!

I hope my writing, one day, approaches yours in quality. Just wonderful!

I trust you know what im talking about ;)

I love this piece, you go into each character's head with such clarity and so realistically i almost believed it was a real scenario. I love this.

<3

Unbelievable!

I am in love with this story.

It's hot sure, but I think its the romance that makes it memorable. When I was younger this story made me realize how lesbian relationships should be, sexy and happy and sweet. It's become my fantasy in more ways than one.

Thank you so much!

Please please please pretty please could your write some more ?

Did I say please ? :-)

I absolutely loved your story! Thank you, beautiful, for making every section so readworthy....and lustworthy too;-)

This story is fantastic in every sense of the word. Not just tawdry sex, not just overly dramatized "love," instead a perfect balance of emotion and lust, passion and pleasure.

I love this story. Motorcycle lesbians was cool, because they were not what some may typically think. They were smart, business owners, dressed as ladies, not like the typical pictures of "motocycle mommas", their spirit of adventure & competition was exciting as you described their "joyrides". I liked the interaction of how they met and what happens after the race. I was concerned re: their immediate interest and desire to live together. It almost was more male reaction then female at this point. Many men, at one point myself included, tend to think that if their is cool, hot sex, that we must be headed to a live time commitment. It would seem that Tina and Valeries' interest is beyond just the physical. They were interested in the total person" mental, emotional and intellectual. I would like to see Tina's & Valerie's relationship developed further in additional stories. Keep up the good work - you are gifted with your use of visual imagery that is captivating!!!

Really loved the story. Great attention to details that made me really connect. A great read. I'm going now to look for more!

This was a very well-written story, and makes me want to read more tales of lesbian love from this author. Damn!

Great story, so glad to have a happy ending and the people treat each other nicely. At last, well done, more please.

I never been so aroused from a story before

Anneli

this story made me fall in love with lesbianism <3

One of my highest compliments to a writer is when I forget I'm reading a story. 5 stars!!!!! I liked, no, loved the characters. Loved the story and it was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was very yummy in many ways. The rock-paper-scissors made me laugh. More, please.

A highly erotic tale that had me captured on every word. A must read!!!

I enjoyed it alot, bikes and babes, two things that go together hand in hand.

Keep on writing.

Held me rapt, loved the whole story start to finish, awesome story telling

this is my favorite story from literotica, how i wish to write like you!!! lol

absolutely amazing loved every bit of it. (could we possibly get a sequel it would be the best thing ever)

Super hot and Extremely well written.

Enjoyed the emotional developments between the two, and could definitely feel the intensity of their bike races. Great stuff!

I've read a lot of stories here on literotica, but this must be the best one so far! It's so real, romantic, intense and touching, that it even made me cry (and come hard, of course)! Thank you so, so, so much for this master piece. I absolutely loved it.

I have say that was absolutely beautiful, hot, got me going, I had to read it to the end. Brilliant writing.

Aaaaaaaaaaww.. <3

I am so in love with this story. It was just as exciting and fast paced as the races and the love making between the women. I definitely believe in love at first sight. It happenewd sQßato me. I didn't want this story to end. I would love to read ab~aout the challenges and triumphs they have after they Smove together. W, can we have more

':)

Is there a better word to use instead of Awesome!

It was more than a joy to read thïs story, I could'nt stop before the last word!

This story is so beutifully written, with a deep and romantic sense of love feelings, that I could only read and sometimes cry.

Thank you for the ride of joy!

NOT!! I love it i love it i love it i love iiiitttttt ;)) thank u LOVE

Damn bikers, glad i belong ;))

Can't even begin to express how much I loved this story. Wonderful characters, great storyline, and extremely well written.

There aren't enough words to say, Wow what a great story!

Thank you!

L

If I could give this story more than 5 stars it would get it!

Incredibly well written, enjoyed reading every word and felt thoroughly engaged in the whole story.

Loved it! Thank you for sharing it! xx

...if Valerie made the lives of her staff a misery just because she was yearning for another woman, then she's not a very nice person (but then, I don't suppose many top business people are very nice). And Jack sounded more like an attack-trained Dobermann than a golden retriever. I'm seventy-something and all the golden retrievers I've met in my life have been sweet and gentle and filled with love and good fellowship. All that said, a great story with exactly the right amount of conflict and tension to keep the reader's interest. Certainly worth five stars.

This was such a really awesome story. You wrote it so well that it is one that you really get into. Loved it!

So Good well done!!

rewarding and enjoyable...

Brought tears to my eyes... It's that time of the month but still so beautiful!

I missed reading this again and again.

It made me want to fuck by a woman

Thoroughly enjoyed this. Physically reacted to the emotions described. Great story.

Beautiful

Lucky-E-Lven this is a fantastic story hope there is more to come with this story please,I really enjoyed the storyline and would like to know how it turns out between Tina and Val and will they get married.

I hope there is more stories about Tina and Val too come cause this story is fantastic hope there will be more soon loved this story thank you Lucky E_Leven. xxx

Okay. I'm glad I have been searching for more stories to fall in love with. This was an amazing story. From hot and fast to fast and hot I couldn't stop reading.

Love this story. Read it many times but what I don't understand is why does she kiss her brother? And especially like that? Its weird. I have two brothers and never kissed either of them. Ew. Anyway great story!

Oldie, but goodie.

You guys ever wonder what happens to great writers when the fade away from here?

I truly hope they're publishing elsewhere; I only wish I knew where that was.

Hi,

I just wanted to say what a fab story, it was really well written. Thank you :) xx