All Comments on 'Joys of Surveillance'

You did a good job for a first time .I hope you are going to do more with this story . It could be really good with some work . still good job I gave it a 4. Not bad for a first story . Keep writing and I'll keep reading .

I was just like him with my step-daughters and their live-in friend. I peeked at them in the half bath downstairs and the full one upstairs. The friend didn't seem to mind my eyes on her body since she wore the tightest outfits she had. I wish I had pictures or video now.

Please continue the story.

Mmhhhh I hope you continue this this is great!!!

what next

Great potential

great start love the daddy daughter fantasy and got off reading your story please keep posting thanks

Nice wank story