by nick whistler
Gets right down to business without all the nonesense fluff. Doesn't try too hard to be verbose. Gets the reader in the character's point of view right away and describes the scenes vividly without being over the top. The story is credible and enjoyable to read. For someone who quit watching porn and going for erotica, this one is one of the best. A+
-KQ
Could be filled out a little more but still good story. 2d chapter would be great, more photography, maybe public nudity!
Great story! Wish I had known a woman like Julia when I was younger. I'd like to meet her now.