All Comments on 'Julie & Steve Ch. 01'

I can't wait for ch 2. More please and soon! Great story. Hot sex and plenty of it.

Get to work on ch 2, it's great work and hot.

So far, so good. Maybe this young girl who is young enough to be his daughter can experience the joys of being a mommy to an older man's baby, and continue, making several siblings to the first baby? I look forward to the future chapters.

Wish I could have had a few of my daughter's friends.

But I'd be dead by now,

from sex or shotgun.

She seems to really liked being called a slut. Maybe she will allow herself to be treated like a slut in public.

I enjoyed the story, though there were some typos and a few glaring incidents of switching view (from her and him to me and you) that jumped out and caught my attention.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I loved it, thank you for encouraging me to read it .. its lovely :-) - Mandy

I really liked this story - but the viewpoint changes so often, ("your", then "her", then back to "your" etc etc) that I have to suspect that this story has been adapted from something you've found on the web elsewhere - sorry if I'm wrong, but that's the way it looks to me......

For the read.