by pcummins376
She leaves her room naked, toilets, then enters dad room and removes her panties & Bra. Come on stupid mistakes like that are indications that you don't even read your own stuff
You cant please everyone, Your writing will improve with experience, Keep up the good work, I enjoyed your story.
Alex
This was a good read. I enjoyed it. Simple mistakes happen all the time and I do not believe it ruined or tainted the story in any way. Some people are just too picky
Quite a few women have seen well endowed Dad naked and it makes lasting impression. Often other guys don't measure up and they are not satisfied until they get the real thing.
Very well written . Loved the plot.
Good Love story great great ending
Follow through with this . Need another
story on this.