All Comments on 'Julie's Girls Night Out Ch. 02'

when Travis gets both women?

Wow!! I am sooo fricken hard from this... Great tail (and tail!)

It’s been several months since Julie and Nikki’s night out. I wonder what Nikki has been doing lately to stimulate Scott. Want to bet it involves Julie?<P>

This could go either way. At the end it appears Travis is okay with what he saw on the video. But in the first chapter Travis only seems to want to fantasize to spice up their sex life. He seems to put a distinct barrier between fantasy and reality. “I didn't want to ruin our fantasy by having her think I had crossed the line and wanted it to become our reality.” A good question to ask here is why? Why would he want to separate their (her) fantasy sex life and reality? Maybe because while it is fun to play around the reality of it is quite different?<P>

Surprise, Julie, unilaterally, has now made the fantasy real. One has to wonder just how much truth was really in those ‘tales’ she was telling her husband while he was away. He would never believe that of her of course but you have to now wonder if there was a not a lot of truth in them. <P>

Of course now after the video there is no question about the night out with Nikki. She comes home and spins a tale of sex acts with 3 guys weaving fantasy and truth together. As she has done previously? But in the video he sees it all, girl/girl, vocal, spanking, oral, facials, and finally sex with another guy who has a bigger cock. <P>

When she came home to him what did she do? Spinning a really slutty story she trash talks him, putting him down – as in the past. She bad mouths his dick size: “Can you feel anything at all or is it too loose and wet?" He is so excited he comes quickly. But at this point the fun fantasy ends. “She did not appear as ecstatic as I was. Normally Julie joins me in the moment of post-orgasmic wonderland and smiles as if she has accomplished a great deed when I have cum. She did not seem to be in that place with me and I was a little shocked. This is where we kiss like normal husband/wife and go back to our loving place forgetting the perversions that so recently brought us here. Clearly, her face did not appear 'normal' in those terms.”<P>

The loving wife is not there. The fantasy has now become the reality. She has bought into the slut bitch wife who cuckolds her husband and that moment she disrespects him totally. She demands he eat her with Scott’s cum still in her. She is so stretched out from Scott’s prick it takes Travis whole hand to finally get her off. That darned reality has shown up.<P>

She keeps the video on her computer. Not passworded. So it is likely he will come across it at some time. She obviously thinks he will be okay with it. Will he? That question will make me read the next chapter. But I do have a question: If she was looking to spice up their sex life why not share the video with Travis? Why make him discover it? Personally, I think it is because she is selfish. This little episode is her own special memory and she is not inclined to share, only telling Travis the false story. This is where the disrespect comes in. She can have sex with others and he is too “stupid” to figure out the truth. She hasn’t stopped.<P>

Well done story. Thanks for sharing.

...does he finally accept the fact that he is a wimp/cuckold and that his wife is a cheat, a whore and that her infidelity will only grow with more partners once she knows he is aware and does nothing?

One more chapter would make for good reading, you write well, don't overly embellish, keep it arousing, erotic and stimulating and hopefully you'll put an interesting close to the story, maybe with an interesting twist...maybe small dick becomes a swinger, voyeur or finds a small woman with a small pussy?

This guy doesn't really seem like a guy who is really going to deal with the reality of her actions?

Anyway, look forward to more from you.

....between a hot story and reaching the point where you decide you have to censor comments. Should be interesting.

This being a 'fantasy' website the husband has allowed himself to become a Cuckold wimp. And he loves and will now love it even more that he knows she will have sex with anything that breathes, and he will enjoy every moment of it. I am glad tI don't have this 'Fantasy'

he knows he canalso fuck other women ...n put the vikdeo up so she can see it later also...n do some ass fucking so she can see you do it with other women ...oh yes by the way sendher the site name from whereever youre living now so she can know why you just took all the money n moved n left her with her gf n her hubby...now poor scott will with his low sex drive have to try keeping up with 2 women ...or they can just muff dive

As a want-to-be cuckold. This is a great story. I was hard the whole time. Great build up and twist. I can't wait to hear more. I hope she keeps it "secret" and does not overtly tell him or let him watch.

So Julie is doing the neighbor's, both the husband and wife. She enjoys the husband because he can stretch her out unlike her husband. My question is why she has not included her husband unless she is selfish and doesn't want to share him or she concludes that he has nothing to add to their orgies. Well written but mystery if she knew he would eventually find the tape didn't she invite or at least tell him. Thanks for sharing.

I thorougly loved this story, both Parts 1 and 2. It was exciting, adventurous and damn sexy. I am amazed by the comments the story received though. It seems that some people should be reading the Minutes of the Southern Baptist Convention instead of Literotica. What the hell do they expect? Sin and damnation? Interminable Guilt? Get a fucking life and enjoy the stories for what they are - certainly it's more than what you're getting at home. I look forward to reading about Julie's Night Out Ch. 3 and seeing where the story goes. I think it's very well done and I give it 5 Stars.

I don't normally say that, but in this case, his wife knows he will be watching the video and she is telling him that she cheated on him many times and she really doesn't care what that he knows...because she knows he won't do anything.

I am perplexed. Truly, I am uncertain if the people posting the insults are idiots or just trolls. Do these people read Shakespeare and wish he were still alive so they could insult him for believing in such nonsense or do they understand he was creating a fantasy with his writing? At first I laughed at them assuming they were trolls and being humorous, but then it occurred to me that perhaps I was making the wrong assumption. When they read the sci-fi stories here do they also believe the writers to actually attach that to reality or do they have the mental acuity to recognize the difference. Perhaps it is beyond the capacity of some to imagine that some people are creative and enjoy a good fantasy. Either way, thanks for all the comments...have a great day!

Just being curious I thought I would read this chapter. I skimmed through it and I am glad I did. Whatever fetish you are into, which appears to be into getting off on seeing your wife get fucked far better than you ever could, at least put the story in the correct section the Non-erotic section would be good. Or the Fetish section that would also be good. But enjoy your 'nightmare'

So your calling every reader who reads your story and doesn't like it or the subject matter you wrote about a TROLL or an IDIOT!

Now I am perplexed!

Why should we read you at all if that is the way you feel. A lot of us including me read your story and left no comment. Sometimes I vote and sometimes I don't. And sometimes I leave a comment.

I didn't like your subject matter in your story so that means I am a Troll or an idiot or both. Good to know what author I will avoid and just leave a 1 bomb whenever I see your name. I believe I have the mental acuity to do this.

scandal - You did not understand my point. Perhaps that is my fault so I will explain. I don't mind criticism at all. In fact, receiving that criticism is the only reason I check the comments. Some have been critical without falling into the category I was describing and I enjoy those. The trolls and/or idiots (synonymous really), to whom I was referring, are the folks wanting to launch a personal attack on me based on my choice of subject matter for this story. That is stupid to the point of being comical. Again, I offer the analogy of criticizing a sci-fi writer as an idiot because he creates a fantasy world in his stories. To me that seems silly. I don't care for sci-fi, so I don't read it. I don't waste my time writing the author to tell him he is a moron because I don't like the subject matter or find it ridiculous. I doubt that every sci-fi writer believes in little green men or monsters any more than I really let strangers have their way with my wife.

Please feel free to drop the "1 bomb" as you feel inclined. The ratings are here for others not me. Personally, I vote on stories here based only on the writing. If it is well written I give it a good score regardless of whether it appealed to me personally. Likewise if it is poorly written. I didn't post these stories to receive accolades, but rather simply because I enjoyed writing them and thought others might enjoy reading them. I am pleased some do...and if others don't I only hope that they find something here they do enjoy. Again, have a great day!

....it should be obvious to anyone reading comment sections of LW on Lit that an underlying, or in some cases overriding, sense of moral compunction affects almost anyones interpretation of the erotic value of a story. I think you are in that gray area where you wrote a tweener, not a pure "stroke" story but far enough away from a depiction of mature love to "confuse" some. L:et me help you out with a deflection of anger. "HEY! ALL YOU FUCKING ANONYMOUS PUSSIES. iF YOU ARE ANONYMOUS YOU ARE A WIMP HENCE A CUCKOLD -TO-BE AND HENCE YOU ARE WHAT YOU LOATHE. EAT THAT YOU FAT BALDING MIDDLE-AGED SEXLESS TURDBALLS. COME ON UP TO BILL MERRILL MOUNTAIN IN HIRAM MAINE AND GET YOUR WORLD ROCKED. MY NEIGHBORS ARE FED UP WITH THE SHEEP.ppp (Of course, for your fat asses it can't be Ppp, it will have to be 308pp. It's unfortunate but Lard is a most effective momentum dampener.)

Do guys get off on this? Really? A lying cheating wife?

Now the story was well enough written. But the plot line leaves me cold. I'd enjoy a 3some with the wife, but not this way. Not behind my back or without my approval. My revenge would have been to do exactly the same thing to her she did to me... i.e. find a couple of willing babes and screw them, on tape, without her knowing or approving and then letting her discover the "evidence". If she complained I'd start with her lying and the video she made. I'd also be sure she cleaned my cock after sticking it in the other women. That would be hot wouldn't it. Getter her to suck without her knowing where my dick had been. I'd also make it clear that from there on out in the marriage I'd get as much extra pussy as I wanted, with whom ever I wanted, when ever I wanted. She unilaterally re-wrote the rules - all bets are off.

Now if Julie arranges for her and Nikki to do a porn production with Travis without Scott around... then maybe she'd be forgiven. Does Travis have any pride or is he just totally submissive? Does Travis grow a pair and force his wife to give up her ass when ever he wants it, now that he knows about her? Does he bring over a bunch of his buddies to gangbang her, even if she doesn't really want that?

How does Travis get even? And if I were Travis I wouldn't want to just get even. I'd want to get ahead.

So continue on with the story.

I thought it was great and think you should write more. Don't pay any attention to the naysayers, if they don't like it they don't have to read it.

Great Story! Keep up the great writing and plots!

Besides being well written, it was fun to read, the slow exploration of fantasy into reality, and very well proof-read, too, (and that matters to me when I'm reading. Errors break the spell). I am not at all surprised to find a wife having sex with another person in the Loving Wives section, and as I have not selected the "Vicious Retribution" section of Literotica, I am fully aware that everyone in the FANTASY story might be happy with the outcome. Keep up the good work. Your storytelling skills are excellent, and you take the reader with you on the character's journey, and then, because it is erotic fiction, you deliver good, vigorous and hot sex. Thanks for writing and sharing. Keep up the good work.

Great story - and a big surprise. How different from what he expected she had done that night. If only he could follow up with what happened when he told her he saw the video.

After the great Ch1. This was a disappointment. Wife is a lying cheating selfish Cunt, who was not going to tell her wimp husband and has been Fucking others the whole time. Husband needs to kill himself in the next ch. What a waste of a story. No loving wife here

it happened again. Your turn for the speed dial, TK U MLJ LV NV

Awful!

I would shove her ass out the door. Another cheating bitch. And someone who love another mans come. Just sick.

Sorry you can't satisfy your wife.

- I wish I was the divorce attorney for all the couples who decide to "perk up" their marriages by fucking around. Travis is a wimpy asshole who deserves to see the next video of Julie sucking and fucking all 37 members of the Moose Lodge in one night.

- This is some sick shit! Hot,but sick!

Instead of watching it, let the lawyers get the estate straightened out. NO husband should have to deal with a slut wife the likes of Julie in this story. No wonder they never posted after this.

Yes betrayal! He was clear, what they shared was strictly fantasy. He never suggested or desired anything outside of fantasy to occur. It would appear she has turned a little vindictive about their fantasies, the first occurrence followed her night out. Very mysterious. Evidently, Julie has not & is not being honest & worse, she is mocking him & taking the piss out of him. All in all, she has thoroughly disrespectful him in every way. Considering all of this & taking into account Travis's beliefs, the only option open to him is to pack his stuff & move out without any further reference to Julie. Fantasy or not, the point is, Julie has proven she is a woman out of control, she sees she is free to anything she wants. Any man could deduce, the next step is she will have one or more men on the go & possibly a the same of three somes & the bottom line is, his marriage is over, its just a question of when she looses complete respect for Travis & after that she won't care about Travis or what he thinks about anything, chances are she will probably be in love with someone by the time that happens. He has to take action to stop Julie now, or accept she won't be his wife for very much longer. He must arrest the situation & banish it forever

Closet fags gonna be sucking cock while wife fucks this wimp in the ass.

Nicely done. Waiting for the next chapter

As this story esculates, I expect Scott and Nikki to have Julie shut off sex with her husband Travis. She will be under Scott and Nikki's total and complete control. Julie will be made available only to Scott and Nikki and people selected by them. Meanwhile wimp husband Travis has to rely on his fist for sexual release.

otherwise you are pathetic wimp loser. . act like a man loser

First of all, very hot and erotic story. Wow! But how can Travis be accepting of that betrayal. He should be devastated. The fantasy stuff was just fantasy and something that the couple shared and both enjoyed. That tryst was about humiliation and cruelty. And all Travis does is masturbate? WTF?

I agree with Sarawithlove. Uninhibited sex can be wonderful, including the wife taking a lover, or lovers, if the adventure is shared and all parties are respected. But it can also be destructive and emasculating. That is the case with Travis. What they have done--all of them including Travis--has made him weak and pathetic. And he, out of his self-emasculation, has deceived himself into thinking everything is ok. It is a sad story but perhaps it isn't too late to change.

Well I think her husband should put her out to work!! She don’t do anything for him!!