All Comments on 'Julie's Journal Ch. 02'

The story keeps the interest and is well written. The characters are interesting and credible.

Again I think Julie sounds more male then female. Again I think you should write this from a males point of you ,but again despite that It's a hot story. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Another great chapter in the Quinn family saga. I look forward to her brother's arrival.

Hot story miss, I believe the person who wrote this story has to be a woman, and lady, you are an excellent writer, there was one spot I missed tho, and it was when they got out of the tub and into bed, for the rest of the story. Did I miss it or did you forget to put it in?

Pun intended.

Rudy

Really fun read. You're a great writer, Slam, and I enjoy all your work. Julie is a great character, along with Colleen and Nathan. I can't wait to see what she does with her brother.