All Comments on 'Julie's Summer Schooling'

Great story. Loved it.

The story - both in emotion and technically. I noticed no typos or misspellings; a good job. Thank you!

Excellent writing! I loved all the detail of how they brought in the other woman! This one made me all Hot too! Keep up the great work!!

Your story is another hot one, bit on the dom side, malicious for my preference, but still right erotic. Thanks! But, "kept me wrapt with tales" should be "kept me rapt with tales".

Seriously, we have actually done something like this though not as "dominating"... This would be a shame not to follow up so please, do so....and once again.... Thanks from the Mrs !!!

O.K. Jaymal. Wow. I am astonished with how very detailed this fantasy reads. (Or is it reality?) Gooey, white ropes of semen dangled between the two girls' mouths is a particularly favorite line. Sexy, lewd, filthy perfection.

Her attitude was the most interesting part of the story. Your dialogue is a bit heavy on the "porn" side of the scale for my taste, but I really enjoyed imagining the new girl's confused, aroused expressions.

As much as I liked Yuletide, this story deserves a multipart story!

As always your stories are dirty and so delicious! Julie had no idea...when she was pushed out the door I can just imagine her face! Evil grin!

so good

I luved this sooo much, had my hand down my knickers the hole time x

That was brilliant. Any more?

it wouldnt have killed you to tag the story as non con or releuctance

now people dont give me a lecture its our writers fault he forgot to tag it as non con rather tgan non con

i enjoy group sex stories and and humiliation stuff but only consensual

the poor girl had given no consent she was tricked by the bitch and bastatd

i stopped reading when that cunt lucy slapped her and forced her as i am not into noncon stuff at all

i only read it thinking it would be some hot consensual ffm

wrote this comment to notify the writer to put on noncon/reluctance tag so that people like me are not click baited

the only 2 mercy that he used lube instead of dry one and he actually started slow anal pounding with giving her time to adjust his cock in her body which is a rare occasion for jaymals rapist male characters

thankyou so much for not making that anal fuck as violent painful as you normally do

rest all was too irredeemable especially the way lucy humiliated her before leaving

telling her she got what she came for

no i dont think she came there to give her anal cherry to some filthy low life couple instead of someone she loved

Just a bit too uncaring for me. Dom and sub stuff can be really sexy but it’s still just a game to play. I just don’t like Lucy or James - Psychopaths

Damn.

Lucy went way harder than I was hoping.

She totally violated the Campsite Rule.