All Comments on 'June Gets Even - The Sequel'

I loved the way June plotted this hook up and by keeping among themselves, just think all of the STD the can avoid or even unwanted children.

I loved the way June plotted this hook up and by keeping among themselves, just think all of the STD the can avoid or even unwanted children.

I loved the way June plotted this hook up and by keeping among themselves, just think all of the STD the can avoid or even unwanted children.

The person that wrote this shit is a sick motherfucker.

I loved your plot although the ‘revenge’ fucks of June and Ralph in front of their bound spouses was a little far fetched, as was the eventual ‘swinging foursome’! That said, however, I am a sucker for a ‘happy ending’ and what could be a better ending than the four “fucking happily ever after”! By the way, I also enjoyed Cageytee’s later make over of this fine tale.

June is not wise; but is clever. She just got a free ticket to fornicate, which she had us to believe was beneath her. Is fornication fornication when everyone agrees to fornicate? Yep!

"Charley Ace" is one sick, stupid motherfucker........

I know a lot of readers here don't like swingers story. Maybe Literotica should separate Loving Wives into 2 different Cat - Adultery & Swingers. That way readers can choose what to read, otherwise too many flame mails & negative comments are throw to the writers for no good reason. I feel that's not very fair to the writers. --- Thor

Plot, characters, dialogue, none of it worked for me. I truly enjoyed some of the endings done by others far more than your chapter 2.

That june is some wife we should all have a slut like that, the author an idiot and with each story he becomes a bigger one.

Your stories continue to disappoint me. I shall not waste any more time on them. Good bye. anon jerry

Why on earth did you write this sequel. The first story was great. This first story was great. You just shit on the whole thing. Thank god other writers have posted their stuff and they know how to finish this thing!

Do everyone a favor and break your fingers and hands so you can't write crap like this again,I wouldd of divorced the cunt and beat the living shit out of her lover

Do everyone a favor and break your fingers and hands so you can't write crap like this again,I wouldd of divorced the cunt and beat the living shit out of her lover

I just can't believe that anyone could be so outright stupid as to write this shit.

One of the worst I have ever read.

I don't believe it is realistic but, like in this story, sometimes a story need not be realistic for me to rate it 5*****.

Accepting of betrayal, from eitherside just isn't going to happen.

Garbage.

whatever that is with those families. TK U MLJ LV NV

Charly,

Good job. Haven't seen stuff from you lately. Good to be able to catch this now.

Matt

Worse than the first part.

his cornhole reamed, he sucked a meaty cock, betrayed!

no one felt like reading it. Go back and learn want a man is. The wife in this was as foul as a whore on ape dick. Kelly Hockey's version was better.

Bored old fools, in real life two divorces, they are not really married anyway.

This is what was missing from the first story - an explanation for the jump from revenge and anger to swapping friends. Having said that, this was far from authentic sounding. The dialogue was wooden.

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Works as fantasy. But any touch of reality ends in their divorces. BAH!

Good story

I would just packed my bags and left her to continue on with my life somewhere else as far away from her as possible.

The original story was so fundamentally different that you should have given this one a different title. The Cleve element really made for totally different dynamic. Here you've painted Jerry as the cause of the infidelities when in the original, he was truly a victim of a disrespecting, cheating, lowlife wife and the "friend" who probably wanted to fuck her all along. Maybe the writer doesn't see the perspective shift but it is massive.

enough said. #1 TK

Unlikable characters. They should all just get divorced. No way to take them back after rubbing it their faces. This was ridiculous.

Divorces will happen.

and made it worse.

the beaten spouse, hide the assets and move on. No need to btb since he f'ed up first but no interest in her after that either. So no, I have no interest in how they smoothed it over. Both stories are distasteful.

Can we have LW split off cuck, swing and RAAC stories to their own categories?

Revenge sex and humiliation are not usually a way to repair a marriage.

You are seriously ill. LOL!

because an idea pops into your head doesn't mean it's a good idea.

I get where the author's taking this, but for me it doesn't work. They would be better off splitting up.

these two stories lowered the average on Lit all by themselves.

Me, I’d of packed my stuff, did the financial thing, and quit my job on the way out of town.

But no for me. Silliness building through two chapters just don't get it.

As soon as June untied me I would have proceeded over to Ralph's house and beet the hell out of him. Would have done all of my financial stuff, start a divorce and disappeer.

What a Fu**ed Up story. Totally BS.

But Chapter 2 in worse than Chapter 1. Good thing I can skim pretty quickly when needed, it took longer to type this than to just flush the crap. Signed: BTW

i loved the story and gave it 5 stars. This was the only way the two couples were going to get beyond the cheating that Jerry and Mary did. It seemed to work out just fine. It is not a situation that all couples would be comfortable with. But it seemed to work with these two couples. Great story!!!!

Garbage same as the first but only worse⭐️

Sorry didn't like it.

There will, of course, be no cheating on the agreement. Why in the world would anyone believe otherwise? Truth be told, no one gives a shit whom any of these adulterers fuck.

Rubbish story, statistics prove neither marriage will survive for long.

1/5

Interesting idea, but I wonder how long-lasting it is I have rarely met swingers that went long term (20yrs plus after swinging) I mean a few but so very few and I think most of the ones I see would call themselves polygamous not swingers,,, though I suppose if it's just the 4 of them is more a group marriage kinda thing