All Comments on 'Jungle Law'

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wingedchaoswingedchaosover 10 years ago

So good! Original, erotic and inspirational! What more could one hope for?

avidreadravidreadrover 10 years ago

Great story and unique. Love conquers all. Thank you.

TimothyMTimothyMover 10 years ago
Impressive

You painted a great picture with understanding for both characters, how they would act and think. And I liked that it took time for them to learn even a few words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
So Good

I had a great time reading this story :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice

More stories about flurries. I love them.

ChicosTodosChicosTodosover 10 years ago

Loved this story! I love your writing. Great dynamic between Kaanan and Deshi. Can't wait to read more of your work.

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